Writing : Formal Email


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This is example of formal email. i will receive your feedback kindly. :)))

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  1. Unknown2 March 2016 at 05:56

    Detail information. Great (y)

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  2. Unknown2 March 2016 at 06:33

    *Yours sincerely bro

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    1. Unknown2 March 2016 at 06:35

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    2. Unknown2 March 2016 at 06:36

      ok thank you for your correction, i am typo.

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  3. Unknown2 March 2016 at 09:18

    Good job Tomi!

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  4. Unknown2 March 2016 at 17:12

    Detail information. Great (y)

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  5. Unknown2 March 2016 at 17:13

    Detail information. Great (y)

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  6. Unknown2 March 2016 at 17:22

    Detail information. Great (y)

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  7. Virna Okta3 March 2016 at 21:52

    Imo it'll be better if you write "..or submit them on.." Great email, btw :)

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