Writing : Business Letter


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Stanfield Business School
RC5 7JY, Rochester
United Kingdom
Dave Kloren
Karelstraat 137
1051 Amsterdam
Netherlands

Our ref :
September 26th 2015

Dear Mr.  Kloren

Replying of Confirmation of award

            I and my friends are very delightful when received your email about Confirmation of award. Thank you about your appreciation for our project and actually we cannot wait to develop our project into a viable business venture.

            We proud to be the winner of TechStart business award in this year and we hope we can improve my project better. I think you can inform us day and date of the meeting by telephone. Would you like to give us your contact person?

            I cannot wait to attend the press conference and award ceremony. Can I attend those ceremonies with my family?

            Once again, I and my friends cannot wait to attend the meeting and the press conference and award ceremony.

            I look forward to seeing you at TechStart’s Head Office on the 7th October.





Your Sincerely,


Carl Prakoso

Comments

  1. hakiki sakti21 February 2016 at 21:09

    Such a good post, its really helpful!

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  2. Ari Bekti Setyaningsih21 February 2016 at 21:14

    Nice writing Tom! ;)

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  3. Unknown21 February 2016 at 21:55

    Good job for your formal letter Tomi! :)

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  4. dinawika23 February 2016 at 21:12

    Nice post, Tomi. But I think, you should use 'for' instead of 'about' in 'thank you about your appreciation'. But, overall it's a good letter. Keep writing :)

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  5. Unknown24 February 2016 at 07:43

    Thank you for your correction, dina. I wil be delightful if i get more comment like this.

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  6. Unknown24 February 2016 at 08:27

    nice post bro.. you give me some inspiration for me

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